Script Update

First page of the script! Not all actions or visuals are layed out here but the voice is being developed.

As a first draft, I have just let words flow and even with that said, my initial ideal for him to have a gloomy dipostion has developed further into being bitter, cold and alone. 

INT. Mazikki’s bungalow, Dark and melancholy setting of his bedroom

Mazikki is lying lazily in bed.

MAZIKKI (V.O)

It was a dull, stony winter.

It was clear both within my inner most turmoil and around my pointless existence that my life resembled that very cold, prickly nature of both winters past and present.

That is why I put myself away like an exiled criminal shut out from the light.

Strangely yet purposefully, that is what I wished for.

Chapter one: Isolation

INT. Bathroom. Day time

The bathroom was suffused by an artificial indistinct light.

MAZIKKI (V.O)

It was within this exile that life did me no favours. My mindless brothers surpassed me in every way without caring for my existence.

My life separated from others when my heart separated 5 years ago- a sweet, delicate woman that slipped out of my grasp before being confronted by icy blackening manner of death.

It is only natural that I too surrounded my life in darkness.

ANNETTE (TEXT)

Why?

MAZIKKI (V.O)

Something had become of me within the many nights. A dream of some kind- a women somehow.