Feedback 18th March 2013

FDA Media Practice – Specialist Project – Tutor: Barrie White

INDIVIDUAL TUTORIALS – Monday 18^th March 2013

Name:        TARA PEAK

Points discussed (with feedback):

Script – Excellent script work so far. Well laid out in an industry format. A few typo errors need to be addressed.

Storyboard – Ongoing, see notes re shot list at bottom of page.

Schedule – Looks to be on schedule, but a test of visual style will help you realise what work is involved.

Actors/Crew – Voice over artist(s)

Blog – Looking good with good planning and visuals. Hope to see at least one mockup of your visual style soon.

Dangers/Threats (to be addressed):

Transitions between scenes need to flow and not jar, for example the move from bathroom to cave. Also linking of the woman and spirit at the end?

Schedule could be at risk if visuals get to involved?

Recommendations:

Proof read script for typo errors.

You could try and break down the script into a basic shot list, to get an impression of amount of work you have set yourself. If necessary you can streamline but maintain the storytelling.

Create one mockup of your visual style – one finished storyboard frame in the manner of the final animated look.